April 24

100WC

My writing goal is to use more descriptive words.

The woods were eerily quiet. Not a sound could be heard. Not a bird chirped in the silence. Then footsteps. The thud of boots on the moss covered floor, and the faint sound of humming. The trees seemed to part for whatever it was. All having a  fear for it that no one could extract. The thing came into view, but it wasn’t a thing a all. It was wood. It was alive, but somehow it… wasn’t. It stood there staring blankly at the trees. It moved toward one, then moved no more.


Posted April 24, 2018 by emilyr2017 in category Uncategorized

2 thoughts on “100WC

  1. antsclass

    More gold!
    I love the way you create your creepy mood with well-chosen words and careful sentence structure. The repeated reference to ‘it’ builds suspense and mystery as well.
    Well done,
    Ant

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  2. charlotte

    What an amazing piece of writing. But what is the humming sound as you described it. I think that you definitely achieved your goal good job.
    Charlotte

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